Prepare for laughter during today’s post. But – before we get onto the giggles – I want to share two important bits of news.
Paris Carter reviewed Seconds Before Sunrise, stating, “The novel also includes several internal struggles for Eric and Jess that sparks tension throughout the entire novel, and it’s the chaos of them struggling to work out their answers and fight themselves that bring Shannon’s novel to a second dimension.” Read the entire review here or check out his review of Minutes Before Sunset first.
I also participated in an interview with Doodles, doodles everywhere. We talked about what hurts me the most as a writer, and I expanded on the research that went behind The Timely Death Trilogy. Check it out.
It’s been a few days since I participated in my first podcast interview, but I wanted to write about something fun since my last post was rather dreary. That’s when my mind immediately returned to The Lurking Voice. (Just a small, Kansas City update though, they found the Highway Shooter, so things feel a lot better around here. Maybe that’s why I’m so eager to post something I can laugh at…I mean, laugh with you…as you laugh at me.)
Back to the topic.
If you listened to the full interview – which you can by clicking here – then you know that I confessed to many writing strategies that I haven’t mentioned before, although “strategies” will quickly turn into a debatable term during this post. My ultimate, reluctant confession happened when we discussed November Snow, my first published novel.
I was 11 when I started writing it and 16 when it was published. It’s safe to say that it isn’t my best work, but I am planning on re-writing it. As we were discussing this, Ryan Attard asked a great question. How does a preteen plan a novel out? That’s when I said it.
November Snow was based on a game that I played out with my Barbie dolls as a much younger kid. Now, if you’ve read November Snow, then you might be concerned, considering how violent the book is, but there’s no need to be concerned – (I think.) That’s what I told my high school teachers anyway when I was asked about the dark nature of it. But that’s another story for another day.
Today, I wanted to share a funny truth to November Snow. No matter how dark the story is, many of my characters were actually based on the dolls I used. I admitted to it on the podcast, and now I am re-confessing it on here. Even better, I dug through some boxes, and I found the old toys, so I’m sharing a few of them as well as small excerpts from the novel that proves this goofy aspect of my writing.
You’ve been warned.
A little background before we begin:
November Snow is a young-adult, dystopian novel, and it is told from dual, first perspectives: Daniel and Serena. Unfortunately, I lost the Serena doll (she might have lost a limb or two or maybe even a head.) But I still have Daniel, who you will see soon. I’m going to share three pictures, and each picture has numerous characters on it. Below each picture, I will have a one-sentence background, and below that, I’ll be sharing the real excerpt from the novel. I’ll also include page numbers as well as who was telling the story at the time (Daniel or Serena.) I am also including a little note, explaining how my 11-year-old brain worked. Got that? Okay. I even think I’m lost, but trust me – it’s organized. Hope you chuckle as much as I did writing this post! Traveling to the past can be a funny adventure.
First picture: from the left to the right: Robert, Daniel, and Calhoun.
Robert: 19, leader of the Southern Flock (hates hugs)
“I turned around to see Robert’s dark brown eyes staring at me, and my heart lunged into my dry throat…He muttered something, his brown hair shagging in his face, and I laughed. “ (Serena, 156-7)
Note: Believe it or not, he’s not the antagonist. Sort of?
Daniel: 18, leader of the Northern Flock (all around hunk)
“The guy looked like Daniel. He had the brown, muffled hair and tanned skin. He even had the blue and white jacket down, but he wasn’t responding to his name.” (Serena, 181)
Note: So, if you didn’t notice, I even based some clothes off of these toys.
Calhoun: age unknown, Daniel’s mentor. (kind of a hard ass)
“From the bottom step he could have been mistaken for a modern-day giant. His face was strong, as were his muscles, and he looked like he could barely fit into the sweater he was wearing. He had been in a POW accident, in which he had lost one of his arms, but he refused to tell the story. Normally, he had a fake arm in, but tonight, a gray sleeve dangled at his side, blowing in the chilled November wind.” (Daniel, 25)
Note: if you listened to the podcast, then you know this character actually ended up being very similar to my real father. Except my dad has both arms. And he’s not a vet. But I swear they are alike.
Second Picture: from left to right: Daisy and Maggie
Daisy: 16, member of the Southern Flock (I hate her.)
She doesn’t deserve a note or description. Seriously. Have you ever hated your own characters so much that you regret bringing them into existence? I think Daisy might be in my top three of characters I’ve created and despised. #authorproblems.
Maggie: 16, member of the Northern Flock. (crushes on Adam in private)
“The front door opened, and Maggie walked in. She was wearing a small, pink coat and white disco pants that had gone out of style a century ago, but she still pulled them off easily.” (Daniel, 240)
Note: is it just me or is Daniel incredibly aware of fashion trends?
Third picture: from left to the right: Amy, Justin, and Marisa
Now for the youngsters, the category of characters that caused one of my high school teachers to ask if I needed to talk to someone after she read my novel and discovered only a few of the characters survive. (Seriously. It’s on the back of the book…) From left to right, we have Amy, Justin, and Marisa.
Amy: 14, member of the Southern Flock. (Hates being called “Amy.” Her name is Amiel Marie Young.)
“Amy’s hair was tied back in a French braid.” (Serena, 144)
Note: So this was more of a hairstyle thing, and you can’t really see it in the doll anymore, but it was there. I promise.
Justin: 6, member of the Southern Flock (borderline obsessed with hockey)
“Justin, blond-haired and brown eyed, was whisked off his feet by the collar of his shirt.” (Daniel, 479)
Note: There’s actually a hockey scene in the book just for this hockey-themed doll. (I really have no shame as I share this, do I?)
Marisa: 7, member of the Northern Flock (too small to crush on Adam, but apparently, all the girls like Adam…maybe I should’ve shared Adam.)
“A small girl struggled her way into Adams’s lap and leaned her bony elbows onto the table. She had long, brown pigtails that rested on the wiggling table and innocent eyes.” (Daniel, 44)
Note: The hair is there. The hair is totally there.
So there you go. My young-adult novel that almost got me in trouble as a teen was originally created during playtime as a kid.
Try to figure that one out.
I sure haven’t.
35 thoughts on “Writing with Barbie”
You are so very creative! I would love to take a guided tour of your brain someday; complete with warning signs and a gift shop. You are awesome.
Oh! A gift shop for someone’s mind? What a great idea for a blog post. Lol. Thanks for reading!
I got rid of all my barbies. . . now I regret it, especially with this writer’s block. I guess I am just going to have to use picture of celebrities. . .
It is a really cute idea. I told stories with my barbies all of the time,
I use pictures, too. 🙂 I have “picture books” that I physically print out and collections in my desktop. I hope your writer’s block goes away soon.
Thanks. . . I have this movie editor. . . I make music videos with my pictures.
You have a twisted mind my dear – consider that a compliment 🙂
You give delightful compliments. 🙂 Thank you.
I did so much imaginative play, either my original stories or in the Star Wars Expanded Universe with my Barbie dolls! That’s great that it also shaped one of your stories! It is also funny because a few comments mentioned this very topic in the Feminist Friday Discussion about children and youth media I ran on my blog yesterday!
I will have to check out that post. 😀 I was speaking with a few fellow writers as I wrote this blog post, and it was really interesting hearing some of their confessions. One based one of their protagonists off of an imaginary friend. Another had characters they based off their childhood friends’ stories that she used to tell him. It sounds like childhood hugely impacts a lot of stories that are written later in life. Pretty fun to hear about.
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Thank you for sharing!
Okay, now I’m really curious. Can you perhaps share exactly what your teachers were worried about. I mean, in both of my books, people have died, but no one freaked out.
Also, did you get my e-mail?
I did receive your email. I will respond tomorrow because I have a bridal shower in t-minus 30 minutes. But I wanted to respond to your question because I think other readers might wonder about it to. It’s a rather long response:
I might do a blog post about why a few teachers grew concerned, but I’m not sure how to without spoiling a major portion of the novel. Basically, November Snow consists of two groups of homeless children, called the “Northern Flock” and the “Southern Flock.” They’re homeless because they have special abilities, and the government kills them upon birth. In a way, the homeless kids are the lucky ones. There is a total of 24 kids mentioned in the book – and very few survive, so there’s a lot of death in the book, and – although I can’t get into too much detail – I think the teachers were concerned about the killing of young children, since they fell between the ages of 4 and 19. November Snow was also published in a time where practically no one self-published. (Kindles weren’t even around.) So I think it was very unusual, and they didn’t know how to handle it. Plus, I can admit this: I was kind of “known” as the kid who’s mom died, and – as sick as it is – I got picked on for it, so I had a lot of anger issues during the time before it was published. After November Snow was published, my anger subsided, but I think they thought it would get worse. But that’s all my speculation.
Thanks. I would have thought that it made sense you’d write about young characters, considering how old you were when you started writing it. Anyway, I understand. We all have our different ways of coping with things.
Very true! I remember feeling very confused that they took it so seriously since it was a novel, but I now understand that they were simply concerned adults. I don’t hold it against them, but I do believe it would be an interesting blog post. If I write about it, I will be sure to link to your blog, thanking you for the idea.
I am convinced that the multi-best-seller, Erin Hunter, started out the same way except she had stuffed cats instead of Barbie dolls. Whatever works!
Huzzah! I am not alone. lol Thank you for sharing.
This makes me feel slightly less embarrassed about the short story I wrote recently….that was entirely about dolls! 😆
Now that is awesome!
There is something very disturbing about those dolls. Maybe it’s cos I have a fear of dolls.
And knowing you used fire on them at some point
If you have nightmares about it, I want to hear about them. :] jk
This is absolutely awesome! Thank you for sharing – it’s always interesting to read about other writers’ methods, but this is definitely something I haven’t seen before 🙂
I am glad you enjoyed it! I’m starting to think I should’ve shared this much earlier on.
I hope it will inspire you to share other stories about your writing, even if they are odd 😉 I think a lot of people can relate in one way or another.
That’s a great technique–like storyboarding. Personally, I tend to use music to figure out characters and even resolve a scene. Thanks for checking out my blog!
Thanks for checking out my blog, too. :] Glad you had fun reading this.
I’m dying of laughter! I used to have twisted dark stories as a kid with my Barbies (someone always tried to drown my heroine during bath time). Excellent! Just Excellent!
It’s hard to find knowledgeable people on this topic, however, you seem like you know what you’re
talking about! Thanks