Authors use various methods to write novels. Some of these strategies are popular, while others are simply bizarre, and two years ago I confessed one of my strangest approaches.
You see, I began writing what would be my first published novel when I was 11, and because I was 11, I loved to daydream with dolls. Instead of plotting with a pen and paper, I pulled out those Barbie dolls—the same dolls that told me I could be anything while I was growing up—and I assigned each one to a potential character. I played out scenes, I tested dialogue, I assessed locations, and I watched my book come to life…Well, a plastic life. And the results were pretty humorous.
Many of my characters’ physical descriptions were actually based on the dolls I used. You can see more of this in the original novel, but some of the characters changed in the remake. That’s right. I’m talking about my upcoming release, Bad Bloods.
Bad Bloods began as a game I played with my Barbie dolls when I was a kid.
Now, if you’ve read the original or even the back covers, then you might be concerned for 11-year-old Shannon, considering how violent the book is, but there’s no need to be concerned. (I think.) Today is meant for laughter. Today, I wanted to share that funny truth behind Bad Bloods, no matter how dark the story is. Even better, I still have these toys (and I definitely still use them to this day), so I’m sharing a few of them as well as small excerpts from Bad Bloods that prove this goofy aspect of my writing.
You’ve been warned.
A little background before we begin:
Bad Bloods in 35 words or less: 17-year-old Serena is the only bad blood to escape execution. Now symbolized for an election, she must prove her people are human despite hindering abilities before everyone is killed and a city is destroyed.
Bad Bloods is told from dual, first perspectives: Daniel and Serena. Unfortunately, I lost the Serena doll (she might have lost a limb or two or maybe even a head), but I still have Daniel, who you will see soon. I’m going to share two pictures. Read below for info on the characters, including a one-sentence background and a real excerpt from the novel. I’m also including a little note, explaining how my 11-year-old brain worked. Got that? Okay. I think I’m even lost, but trust me—it’s organized. I hope you chuckle as much as I did while writing this post! Traveling to the past can be a funny adventure.
Robert: 20, leader of the Southern Flock (hates hugs)
“Everything is fine.” Robert’s light voice didn’t match his stiff movements. When he ran a hand through his hair, his brown bangs stuck up. “But everyone needs to be quiet.”
11-y-o Note: Believe it or not, he’s not the antagonist. Sort of? Okay. Let’s go with antihero.
Daniel: 18, leader of the Northern Flock (all around hunk)
Daniel walked through the crowd, but it wasn’t much of a walk. It was more like stumbling and I had never seen Daniel stumble. Not once. Not even when he was fighting. But he was wearing the blue-and-white plaid jacket and it fluttered amongst the crowd of black coats and gray sweaters. He was practically asking to be arrested.
11-y-o Note: So, if you didn’t notice, I even based some clothes off of these toys.
Calhoun: 57, Daniel’s mentor (kind of a hard ass)
Before I had the chance to knock, the door swung open and smacked against the brick wall. An enormous man filled the entrance. The muscles in his left arm were hard to ignore, but the sleeve that should’ve been tightly wrapped around his right arm was dangling at his side, limbless. Despite his injury, Calhoun wasn’t troubled one bit. A shotgun swung outside and pointed toward my chest.
11-y-o Note: So, my one-arm GI Joe helped create this character, but this character’s personality is very similar to my father. Though, my dad has both arms…and he’s not a vet. But I swear they are alike. You might also remember me mentioning Calhoun in Tackling YA in Diversity, where I explain how I went about writing a character with a disability.
Michele: 17, mother figure of the Northern Flock (Her origin story is up on Wattpad: Read Michele)
But the most beautiful one was the woman. She was tall and willowy, with long white hair and gray eyes like mine. Unlike me, though, every part of her seemed soft, like a warm glow followed her around wherever she went.
11-y-o Note: I definitely kept her white hair, and the character is almost always wearing black in the book as well.
Ami: 14, member of the Southern Flock. (Hates being called “Ami.” Her name is Ameline Marion Lachance.)
When I first laid eyes on the girl, she was dressed head to toe in pink. Her blonde hair was threaded back into intricate braids, and a bow sat at the end of the braids where the golden strands came together. When Ami cried, she swung her head back and forth, and the bow swayed like a pendulum, all neat and tidy like a present.
11-y-o Note: You can’t really see the doll’s hairstyle anymore, but it was there. I promise. I also used pink on this character a lot.
Tessa: 9, member of the Northern Flock (too small to crush on Adam, but apparently, all the girls like Adam…maybe I should’ve shared Adam…Adam’s origin story is also up on Wattpad: Read Adam)
I pointed to the girl with pigtail braids. “That’s Tessa.”
“So what?” Tessa said, looking over her shoulder at Adam, then to me, her earthy brown eyes matching her powers and her complexion.
11-y-o Note: Her hair, like Ami’s, used to be tied up, too.
On a serious note, I think writing can be explored in a million ways, and I love my shameless Barbie play. I’ve legitimately called my #1 beta reader complaining of being stuck and she has asked me if I pulled the Barbies out yet. Having a physical representation works for me. I definitely don’t use their descriptions in newer writings, but I wanted to keep what I could for the rewrite since this particular work was built upon them. Imagination shouldn’t be chained to rules. Find what works for you, explore how you want, and daydream until the end of time. Even if that means playing with dolls.
Original posted April 19, 2014
It actually has different dolls and characters, but some of those characters have changed, so I didn’t include them in this post.
To everyone I met at BFest this week, thank you for coming out!
I had a blast!
If you missed out, you can buy signed books from Barnes & Noble in Oak Park Mall in Overland Park, KS and in Zona Rosa in Kansas City, MO!
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15 thoughts on “#MondayBlogs Writing With Barbie”
Hey, you’re living your childhood dream, cute how the story started.
I’m glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading. 😀
Glad you enjoyed it! Thank you for reading and commenting. 😀
Thanks for sharing this fun post.
So glad you enjoyed this post. 😀 Thank you for reading and commenting, Marilyn!
I just wanted to point out that I think we both have Daniel, assuming that Daniel is the one with the exciting hair. Was he formerly in the medical profession before he switched to book protagonist? If so, definitely the same guy.
Haha! You’re probably right, though I can’t quite remember how he started out. Your comment is super funny, because Daniel can heal people in Bad Bloods, though his healing comes with consequences. So…he’s kind of a doctor?
Definitely a career path that progressed naturally, then! Hopefully, the salary for medical work in dystopias isn’t too shabby.
Haha! Yeah. Hmm…Come to think of it, maybe he heals because he was a doctor Barbie and I’ve completely forgotten that fact. It has been over a decade, but 11-year-old Shannon was pretty impressionable, especially toward dolls. 😛
That would make so much sense!
It’s kind of funny, because I also came up with stories using toys (Belville, actually. Legos for girls) that still influence my writing.
Toys are awesome! Having a physical representation helps so much.
thanks for share very nice post !!!